Wednesday, 28 September 2011

SETTINGS

PLACE: Beach
TIME: Summer
PLOT

Jerry, a young English boy, and his mother are on holiday at a beach they have come to many times in years past. His mother who is a widow is concerned for her son to be who he wants to be. Though he knew his mother was not quite happy about him being out on the bay alone, because he wants to swim anyway .The English boy swam towards some boys far on the rocks. The boys waved at him and they noticed he is a foreigner. He felt accepted as he dived and they watched him. He failed as he tried to stay under water for some time as one of the bigger boys did. Suddenly he was left behind alone and the boys have disappeared. He finds out that they went through a tunnel in a rock and he was impressed. He tried all he could to go through as well, and after some hard practice by himself he learn how to control his breathing. After this hard practice Jerry finally manages to go through the tunnel and he was happy and told his mother what he has archived.

CHARACTERISTICS OF PROTAGONIST
 Jerry is the main character
 He is an English boy and he is 11 years old.
 He was a good swimmer.
 He was hard working
 He does not give up on what he wants.

1 comment:

  1. Good work hey.
    well i give you a 5/10.
    your setting is too general, your summary is too subjective. there are some grammer faults and the main characer is not fully described. try harder next time hey.

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